Saturday, November 28, 2009

personal evaluation (Billy Connelly)

EVALUATION

MARK
Presentation 10%
9
Body language & Eye contact 10%
8
Structure 10%
9
Content 40%
37
Language 20%
19
Pronunciation & Intonation 10%
10
Evaluation (Final Mark)
90

COMMENT

I used a power point document to display my presentation. Because my presentation was about a comedian, I also showed a video of his work at the end where he tells a joke about algebra, i found it an adequate video since we are doing a cientific batxillerat. Timewise it was over the minimum of five minutes.


I found that my body language was good, i was moving and refering to the presentation on the powerpoint a lot which helps the audience to situate themselves better. I read from the powerpont keywords sometimes and had to refer to my notes near the end of the presentation
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Refering to the structure or the presentation i made a long ontroduction about the comedian ,l explaining the important moments in his life, before the introduction i asked a question to the audience which was ''do you know who Billy Connelly is?

Content, i think I gave the audience some information that they didn't know before, not so much refering to the comedian, but to comedy in general, that it's a lot diferent to the comedy in Spain.

Language, the vocabulari was correct for the audience I was presenting to, all relating to the topic. My voice was a little bit high pitched because I was a little bit nervious and I talked quite fast that maby made it hard for some people to understand me. I spoke fluently, but too fluently. I used many fillers in between information.

I think the mark I put is a deserved mark because considering my level of english i could have done a lot better, i have to learn to speak out in front of a crowd with confidence. Most of my classmates gave me nine's and 10's but I think it's because of my accent and the way i speak. If i had said the same in a catalan accent the mark would have varied a lot. I think I have to dedeicate more time practising at home before the presentation and expand the infoprmation i give.vocabulary, use more fillers and intonate more.

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